Fri Mar 28

1. Advice:

-more unique camera shots and angles
-get music sorted first - sound scape overall is quite poor
-consider diegetic sounds - foley? sound effects?  (sound effects for flashbacks?)
-more smooth and skillful match on action

-the main aspects to consider:
CLARITY OF STORY/OPENING SEQUENCE
SOUNDSCAPE
FOOTAGE/EDITING
CREDITS

Update planning

-timelines (try using =  http://dipity.com/     or   http://www.timetoast.com/  to create timelines)
-script
-storyboard

-you should also consider:
-music
-actors and characters
-costume & props  (inc make up  (esp the blood stuff - trials?)
-locations


DRAFT 3 DUE BY NEXT TUES  (longer to complete) ......but would be good to have done by Friday if you can, you could do a 4th draft before holidays if you can?